The story was very interesting with good imagination. It had good flow and was easy to understand. The choice of words went well together. Also the story had all the objects needed that were in the box. The story had very few mistakes, and so I choice it for my top story.
2. Pa Kou Lee (Story In a Box)
The beginning of the story really caught my eye and was very interesting. The plot was planned out well and was easy to understand. It had good imagination and used all of the items.
3. Nan Wang (A Different Day)
The plot was put together very well. It had good flow and had all the requirements needed for the paper. The words for the story were chosen well and worked great together.
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